. RE-DRAFT OF NARRITIVE

·   Riley is walking home by herself, through a graveyard

·    She finds a necklace

·   She takes the necklace and wears it

·    She goes home

·   As she is sleeping, the person (unnatural being) she took the necklace from comes into her room

·    NEXT DAY

·   Riley is sitting in lesson and feels the presence of someone staring at her through the window

·   The person stares at her through the window (Halloween inspired Michael Myers)

·   Classmate asks her where she got her necklace from

·   She tells her that she found it by her relative's grave

·   Classmate tells her that she should return the necklace as soon as possible as she might wake the dead

·   NEXT DAY

·   Riley returns the necklace to the grave.