. IMPROVED NARRATIVE

1.     Riley’s (Dawn) on her bed at home, looking at herself in the mirror

2.    Riley talks to Phoenix (Sharna) about feeling watched

3.    Phoenix persuades Riley to attend the party

4.    Riley argues, she doesn’t want to attend the party - typical aspects of the final girl theory

5.    She’s finally persuaded by Phoenix, and attends the party

6.    Loki attempts to touch Riley in a sexual manner, this is seen by a bystander

7.    The bystander tells Phoenix and, Phoenix then believes Riley’s out to ruin her relationship with Loki

8.    Riley and Phoenix go home, and while Phoenix is busy in the bathroom – Riley notices a shrine to herself under the bed (in Loki and Phoenix’ house)

9.    Riley thinks Loki is to blame and the owner of the shrine

10. Riley runs out of the house, she manages to drop her key = and Phoenix realises she’s  found the shrine

11.  New day

12. Riley “you need to look under the bed! I think Loki’s obsessed with me”

Phoenix “what are you going on about?!”

Riley “JUST LOOK UNDER THE BED!”

13. Phoenix turns to look at Loki who is lying down in the bed with her, and the audience feels as though Loki is the guilty one because of her menacing stare

14. Flashback? – past interaction

Riley and Loki were together earlier on in the year.

Phoenix manages to distract Loki from her and that is how they begin their relationship.

Phoenix’ paranoia sets in, because of this event and therefore she is always wary of Riley – this is why they become best friends, so that Riley has no reason to go after Loki